Lonely

by Dawn Manna   Mar 18, 2005


Lonely, so lonely
Why is this so
Is the reason I cry
From all this pain inside
Or am I just lonely
Don’t you know I’m lonely?
Do you even care?
Why did my heart stop?
And grow so cold
Is this normal
Or am I just lonely?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aw, This is sad, Yet really good. Lovin' the short verses and has a good point in it! Keep it up =]

    luv natz x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by Hareem

    A fine and sad poem, the doubt in the last line is touching.

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    I read this and loved it. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Thats sad : ( I have felt this way many times. Great writing, I'm loving your poems

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Good job, try to be less repetitive.

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