by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи Mar 26, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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A beautiful child |
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That's exactly how my parents treat me sometimes, except i have an older brother and he treats me like shit too! |
by Ferris
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ok i think u should make it the child dies but her ghost like hauts the parents 4 eternety making their lives hell |
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Great poem! sad but good and I think you should have a happy ending being as though that girl went through so much all ready |
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Wow thats a great poem! I really don't know what a good title would be! |
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thanks alicia I think I'll do that.... |