No one

by Amanda Bee   Mar 30, 2005


I could sigh, and no one would listen.
I could cry, and no one would see.
I could give up on all my hopes and dreams,
and no one would try to stop me.

I could bleed, and no one would help me.
I could need, and no one would pay.
I could turn around and leave this town,
and no one would ask me to stay.

I could pout, and no one would notice.
I could shout, and no one would stare.
I could lie down here and die right now,
and no one would even care.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Harry Bryant

    Many people care even now years after you have written this wonderful piece, I have been away for a while, not incarcerated but just lost my desire to write, and here I am again reading and thinking of others. keep up the great work. your friend harry

  • 18 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    Short and simple i like it

  • 18 years ago

    by skyfox

    WOW your sure do have a way of transporting emotions with words. I love how you have constructed this and how you have conveyed the desperate lonliness.

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Great poem i feel the same!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    It's so sad! I also sometimes feel this way. Love your work.

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