Vacantly Awaiting

by HOLLY ARMER   Apr 19, 2005


I sit among the chaos, silent and serene.
Lost within myself, living in a dream.

Caught within a trance, unable to relate.
Slipping into time, holding hands with fate.

Stumbling over hope, as I cleave to sanity.
I melt within the sun, forfeiting reality.

Vacantly awaiting for the world to fade away.
As I long for the past to take away today.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Trevor

    Wow, that poem was simple but it had so much meaning underneath, great job
    trevor--

  • 19 years ago

    by Dead As Yesterday

    Wow thats a cool poem kinda reminds me of ozzy. I realy liked the second a fourth stanza's
    Dave....

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy r

    I love the flow of your poems Holly, short, to the point and written beautifully, please keep writing, Love, Tim

  • 19 years ago

    by Forever29

    Excellent poem, Holly. It makes a lot of sense, I can relate. Keep it up! 5!

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    So short, but every line was on track.... perfect lines! I LOVED it! Nice job, Holly. 5/5

    Love you
    Heather

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