When Religion Turns Evil (Part II)

by Hina   Apr 25, 2005


When Religion Turns Evil (Part II)

A kite that’s flying, in a world so divine
A woman is lament, could it be a sign?
God shows symbols, through forces of nature
And brings the tsunamis, down like a picture

A culture is ending, in this hate-obsessed land
A father is praying, to hold on to her hand
A mother is waving, so someone can see
The passion she has, to save her enemy

Can anyone hear them, their cries for Love
Is anyone up there, anyone above?
Though everyone’s shocked, still living their lives
Still slaying away money, on spent obsessed wives

Can anyone perceive them, in their bottles of wine,
The reflection of their diamond, or their Rolex’s time?
Can anyone hear them, through the pearls that they pierce
Can anyone see that Armageddon is near

God had said once, that he’ll bring down the world
When evil takes over, and a finger has curled
Millions of small children, trapped in a land
Where cruelty became desire, destruction a plan

Obligated He is, to obliterate this land
Where prosperity was required, to walk on sand
Where inhabitants grew, without care for a child
Where each human animal, become meticulous and wild

Someday we’ll feel, the pain that they felt
The destruction of homes, the universe will melt
Then we will hear, the words of our God
“I told you I’d come,
When your frozen souls
…thawed”

© Hina Ali H

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hina

    Thank you for catching that...I fixed it.

    :)

    Hina

  • 18 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    Can anyone perceive their sound, through the pearls that they pierce
    Can anyone see that Armageddon is near

    I'd say that part and the last few lines need more work on the flow. But all the other parts were very good, they flow was almost perfect! I must say I enjoyed this poem a lot...it was original and clear. Keep writing,
    Satuxxa

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel E F Allen

    I like the originality of subject matter in this - there is annotheer poet on here - Robert - whose work shows the same degree of variation of topic - i think you would enjoy reading his work and learn something from him. I like the style in which you write and of the two I think this is the stronger. Well done. Love Rach xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    i like the way you wrote this poem! I think you are very talented by what poems i have read! Keep it up :)

  • 18 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    wow very original, even better then the first i think. you definetely have talent keep it up!
    xxxChristinaxxx