by Hina Apr 25, 2005
category :
Life, society /
about society
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When Religion Turns Evil (Part II) |
by Hina
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Thank you for catching that...I fixed it. |
by Dorotea©
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Can anyone perceive their sound, through the pearls that they pierce |
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I like the originality of subject matter in this - there is annotheer poet on here - Robert - whose work shows the same degree of variation of topic - i think you would enjoy reading his work and learn something from him. I like the style in which you write and of the two I think this is the stronger. Well done. Love Rach xx |
by Amanda
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i like the way you wrote this poem! I think you are very talented by what poems i have read! Keep it up :) |
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wow very original, even better then the first i think. you definetely have talent keep it up! |