So Shall

by Kevin   Apr 27, 2005


When feigning composure and normality
y'know the fakeness of oneness that's plague
I enjoy light chatting on energy
discussion of things unproven and vague

When shaping a viewpoint from blankness
like party opinion chameleons you know?
our general eyes become a nation
a communistic psychology show

When trekking alphabets starting points
naked as the day you were mourned
expressly modeling wise and sexy
shielded by what you've adorned

these things conspire confederacy style
to distract one from the proper one
days spent dawning all the while
regardless of the damage done

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  • 12 years ago

    by L


    Okay, My first guess was that you were talking about god, but then I changed my mind.

    Here are my thoughts on this:

    ^^^When feigning composure and normality
    y'know the fakeness of oneness that's plague
    I enjoy light chatting on energy
    discussion of things unproven and vague

    ---I'm unsure but I think that you are talking about the unity of man, more like government, in the two first sentences. You consider it not genuine, fake that it spreads rapidly like a plague.
    Then on the next two sentences, you prefer to talk informally, casually and unconcerned about this type of subject that is vague and not proven.

    When shaping a viewpoint from blankness
    like party opinion chameleons you know?
    our general eyes become a nation
    a communistic psychology show

    -----When we try to come up with answers from no where to base ourselves from, our ideas are rearrange " like a party opinion of chameleons" meaning that they change, they don't stay consistent. Those ideas or theories changed to adapt to what other people think and some times they cause disagreements and conflicts that can lead to war.

    When trekking alphabets starting points
    naked as the day you were mourned
    expressly modeling wise and sexy
    shielded by what you've adorned

    ---- When we go back to see our history's beginning we are unprotected and vulnerable just as when we where in sorrow and deep regret that its represented like that because that's how they wrote it to alert or to make sure people is aware of the appealing details of what they want us to know.

    these things conspire confederacy style
    to distract one from the proper one
    days spent dawning all the while
    regardless of the damage done

    ---- This type of thinking is fed to us from a conspiring alliance to distract us from knowing the truth and forget the days when we suffered and the damage they have cause with their decisions.

    Okay, this is what I understood from your poem. I apologize in advance if this is not what you meant, please. Correct me if I'm wrong.

  • 18 years ago

    by *~vixen~*

    Great job!
    5/5+

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelli

    Wow....lol wow, thats all i can say....but yeah thanks for seeing my stuff. take care.
    luv always,
    kelli

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    THAT WAS AWESOME!!! really great poem! thanks for the advice on my poems... i'll keep that in mind on my other poems that i write... hmm... thanks for commenting on my poem!!love always, Jessica

    xX-missing him-Xx

  • Damn, I really need to start reading my comments before I post them, here is a revised version of my previous post:

    "This poem is too clever for me! You should be published, if you aren't already.
    Thanks for your advice, I'll try to take it on board. My poem wasn't as good as it could be, because the website wouldn't let me use apostrophies. Consequently, it didn't read as well in the final version as in the original. Thanks again. Charlie x"

    I think that makes more sense. Ta. x