My Black Sea

by Poetically Speaking   Apr 29, 2005


Song

I believe I can make you happy
or maybe you'll just scream
you seem to know right where I belong
or maybe you're just a dream

And to think you were ever free
to think you could ever see
not that you were alive
but now you belong to me

and in this sea of black dreams
I don't have a heart to give
I hold on to you
and you help me live

I think you think I'm lost
I think that you are right
I believe you know the truth
help lead me to the light

the closer I think you are
the farther it seems you get
you will leave me stranded here
I’ll remember every bit

why do you cling to me
what is it I don't know
one of us has to fall
I have to let go

I am still inside here
your words bleed right through
I'm stuck in my mind
these feelings feel untrue

help me out
help me die
touch my hand
good-bye, good-bye

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  • 17 years ago

    by dijah

    Nice poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    The spelling was off abit were should be where. You also jumped around too mych in your characters so you really couldn't understand what they said. I think with a bit more detail and alot me focus on who was talking this would be a great read good attempt will look around for some more...

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig


    the closer I think you are
    the farther it seems you get
    you will leave me stranded here
    I’ll remember every bit

    ---By far, my favorite stanza in it!--Nice job, keep it up!

    Love ღ Always,
    Heather M Craig

  • 19 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    holy shit! that was just...wow.....im speechless....i especially loved this part....

    I think you think I'm lost
    I think that you are right
    I believe you know the truth
    help lead me to the light

    the closer I think you are
    the farther it seems you get
    you will leave me stranded here
    I’ll remember every bit

    that was amazing....and you are an amazing writer.....keep it up =)....take care ~much love~ ~many hugs~

    -brittnay- ((5/5))

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