Drowning ©

by Georgi   May 2, 2005


A perfect day, a prefect school,
Surrounded by my friends,
Nothings bad, and nothing cruel,
The last lesson before the end.

Sitting carefully, feeling numb,
A sharp pain crosses my head,
happiness is overcome,
With fear, and pain, and dread.

Eyes focused on the wall ahead,
not one single place to go,
the looks of hatred seem to spread
The clock is going so slow.

Eyes fixed onto my painful wrist,
as if they're glued in one spot,
Staring as if i don't exist,
as my stomach ties in a knot.

Their looks are suffocating me,
I can hear the things they're saying,
Four walls are caving in on me,
inside my head I'm praying.

I'm drowning slowly, feeling hurt
the judgments so much clearer,
The buttons tighten on my shirt,
The walls are getting nearer.

My breath goes short, losing grip,
the room around goes black,
My arms go weak, my legs they slip,
Feels like a heart attack.

Even more are staring now,
on the floor I'm lying still,
Wondering why? wondering how?
Just remember; looks can kill.

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  • 18 years ago

    by »«¤ß詤»«

    wow... very visual i felt like i was there! great use of words! this is a great poem, flows well and great sructure! your very talented! >>5/5<<
    *bec* xXx

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    GEORGI!!!! Georgi, Georgi, Georgi!! :-D!! I'm your favorite poet? Awwwww!! :-D!!!!! I looove you soo much! lol! *cyber huggles* lol!!! thank you, my sweet carmel bunny/meatball hoagie with meatbally goodness! lol!

    ~Sierra

  • 18 years ago

    by xRachelx

    Hey, hey, hey!
    I aint spoken to you for a while...you dont seem to be in the forums as much as you used to be. In fact no one except 'bashers' seem to go there now. I shall be the last solitary meatball hoagie on my own lol. Anywayz great poem, I really like it.
    Hope you're ok.
    Well take care,
    Your fellow meatball hoagie,
    Rachelxx

  • 18 years ago

    by »«¤ß詤»«

    wow this is some powerful stuff! very flowing and emotional loved it! >>5/5<<
    bec

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    You did great until the last that just sucked you really need to work on that last part. Oh well If you get time could you vote and comment on any of my featured work...

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