Your Heart's Bitter Revenge

by HOLLY ARMER   May 7, 2005


Your heart breaks
Shattering in my grasp
Pieces fall, scattering
like fragments of glass

Cutting my hands menacingly
inflicting bitter revenge
Though I find it soothing
like an alcoholic's binge

But your pain severely
echoes through anguished cries
As I see the damage
shadowing your withered eyes

Recoiling from aggression
begging to feel numb
I am the creator of
all you're to become!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dead As Yesterday

    And yet another great one

    Dave....

  • 18 years ago

    by Gemma Sinead Hayward

    You can feel the anger, can't you? I love the lines 'inflicting bitter revenge' and 'i am the creator' . Imagery's a beaut!

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Great similie in stanza 2! Keep it up, Holly! I LOVE YOU dollz, 5/5

    Love,
    Heather

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy r

    I cant give you enough praise for your writing my dear, this poem captures what everyone feels at one time or another, fantastic as always..Love, Tim

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