Comments : A wish

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very nice!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    you got the rhyming down, and it's very sweet. lovely job.


  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Another well written poem! You have a creative mind! Beautiful poem! Sweet and full of true feeling! ~Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    very romantic poem 5

  • 18 years ago

    by ...:NiKi:...

    that is so well written! i love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by erikka baby

    Aww! This was oh so cute! I LOVED IT!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashli

    nice ending! very well written and a pretty good flow! keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Shy


  • 18 years ago

    by tabithaa

    Awww... 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by XxXangeltearsXxX

    aw that is such a sweet poem! its nice to read a happy one because ive only seen :-( before this hehe! well done!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by creasy

    this was beautiful! very lovely, well written! damn, i really love it! lol..keep it up! take care. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    cute! I like it, the ryhme realy fits with this one!


  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    awww that's so sweet brings back memories lol


  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    awwww sooo sweet! i loved it. your an awesome writer!

  • 18 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    WOW!WOW!WOW! This is sooo sweet! I love all your poems! Your an amazing writer!

    <3Much Love<3

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    AMAZING.. very sweet, touching, and extremely heartfelt.. i especially lykd these lines:
    You say that shooting stars don’t come true,
    Well, baby can’t you see that I’ve been wishing for you.

    they're absolutely amazing and wonderful... ur rhyme was perfect.. and i lovd the wording.. gr8 flow..
    keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    very cute...i liked it...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Arora

    awww, that's so cute! xD I loved it, 5/5. <3 awesome poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    sweet and very lovely....I love it, that was so beautiful!!!! Don't know what else to say....

    *Hugs Sabrina*

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert

    very well executed poem it was soft and sweet but showed alot of emotion your work get increasingly better...