Very nice!!!

you got the rhyming down, and it's very sweet. lovely job.

xxx

Another well written poem! You have a creative mind! Beautiful poem! Sweet and full of true feeling! ~Brooke~

very romantic poem 5

that is so well written! i love it!

Aww! This was oh so cute! I LOVED IT!

nice ending! very well written and a pretty good flow! keep it up!

nice!!!

Awww... 5/5

aw that is such a sweet poem! its nice to read a happy one because ive only seen :-( before this hehe! well done!!!

this was beautiful! very lovely, well written! damn, i really love it! lol..keep it up! take care. :)

cute! I like it, the ryhme realy fits with this one!

~Breeze

awww that's so sweet brings back memories lol

5/5

awwww sooo sweet! i loved it. your an awesome writer!

WOW!WOW!WOW! This is sooo sweet! I love all your poems! Your an amazing writer!

<3Much Love<3
~*hAiLy*~

AMAZING.. very sweet, touching, and extremely heartfelt.. i especially lykd these lines:
You say that shooting stars don’t come true,
Well, baby can’t you see that I’ve been wishing for you.

they're absolutely amazing and wonderful... ur rhyme was perfect.. and i lovd the wording.. gr8 flow..
keep it up
nouna

very cute...i liked it...5/5

awww, that's so cute! xD I loved it, 5/5. <3 awesome poem.

sweet and very lovely....I love it, that was so beautiful!!!! Don't know what else to say....

*Hugs Sabrina*

very well executed poem it was soft and sweet but showed alot of emotion your work get increasingly better...