What we think {Small part of}

by allison   Jun 23, 2005



Boy: I met a girl at the mall today

Girl: I met this guy at the mall he wanted to pay

Boy: Her name is Carlie

Girl: I think he’s name was Harley

Boy: She was really pretty

Girl: He made me smile, really witty

Boy: We made a date, for next week

Girl: He’s going to take me too see the pond and creek

Boy: I’ve never felt liek this before

Girl: I just wanna see him more and more

Boy: .. I think I love her

Girl: ..I think I love him

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Wow unique poem..I never read one like that before. I liked it. xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Very unique! Creative too! One thing I would suggest but keep in mind it's just my opinion. I would not worry so much about the rhyme. Other than than great imagination! Keep it up! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    hey Allison, this has a very good flow.
    great job. you're talented.
    take care,
    Marjan

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