Broken Kodak Smiles

by allison   Nov 21, 2006


"Okay, 1-2-..

-Peace Sign, and smile one more time.
These Kodak moments are all you will have left

I believe feeling this way must be a crime
Pain and disbelief as far as the eye can see

Not ever really showing how you feel
Hell, not even knowing your self sometimes.

Have you ever stayed up all night wanting to cry
but the tears just wont come?

I have, Yet next day as soon as i put on that fake mask they flow as fast as rain.

I dont mean to sound emotional
But Iam.

I have those good times, genuinely smiling
But though those times are limited, they're what I'm living for.

Okay, so im done, these thoughts are going through my mind everyminte, everyday.

Just Take the picture, get on with it and know that picture of me is all you will have left.-

..SMILE"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow.. I absolutely love this poem. I can relate to it so much..
    -Peace Sign, and smile one more time.
    These Kodak moments are all you will have left
    I absolutely loved those lines for some reason.. they really stood out to me. You did an amazing job on this poem. I really loved it! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    It was really good.
    I saw the title and felt compelled to check it out.
    I'm glad i did.
    You hid a strong message inside the words.
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by Leah20

    I really like the way this was written. I loved the line :
    "I dont mean to sound emotional
    But I am."
    The following line,however, has a strange flow to it:
    I have those good times, genuinely smiling
    but those times are limited though, they are what im living for.

    instead of that perhaps change it to:

    But though those times are limited, they're what I'm living for

    keep it up!