Sun dosent really shine

by allison   Jan 9, 2006

So why did you leave me
Cause I still love you, Don't you see?

Seasons, Days, Hours pass
Every time I cry, I hope it is the last

Did you ever really care?
Would you have worried if one day I wasent there?

Im trying so hard to get away
But yet still I wait, Sit here and pray

Do realize how much I loved you
And I thought what we had was so true

It has been forever and im trying to move on
All you did was play me, the game was chess and I was your pawn.

The way you left me, broken and torn
Im not even dead and yet me my friends mourn

They know Im lost, not literally but inside me head
Totally messed up by all the things you said

Walking down the street sun shining once again
But when I should feel warmth all I feel is pain


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  • 16 years ago

    by ellewen

    I love it! Its great! What I find is amazing is how you rhyme so well. I didn't find one mistake, (I might have just woken up) but im sure its still perfect. lol and its nice to have a fan. Im adding you to my favorites :) sincerely

  • 17 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Wow... I'm impressed... this poem is SO beautiful and so realistic. It expresses the affect of a broken heart so well, and I can feel the pain behind your words. Wow, great writing hun!

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The poem reflects very well the cold reality of a broken heart

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammi

    Wow do I feel the hurt in this poem I have been there keep up the good work 5/5