Would you be able to elucidate?

by Steven Beesley   Jun 24, 2005


It is with extreme duress that I must now readdress that path that lead me to this mess.

My life now such chaos and full of regrets, a love that is lost that did not stand the test.

No words of verse of eloquence could express the true feelings for you that I must now emancipate. Or else my sorrow will escalate.

A slave to love, you have shackled me; mind, body and soul entirely.
So long a time and so exquisitely.

Maybe you would be able to elucidate where I went wrong to be in this state?

I search my mind for the answers to this mess, that I must now readdress.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    nice vocabulary used within this poem, something i need working on! enjoyable peice, keep up the writing!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Bob,

    Thanks for your kind comments. In fact allot of your poems have been inspirational to my writing.

    Best regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by brittany

    thx for the commit:) ur a really good writter keep it up