Broken heart

by BleedingAngel   Jul 12, 2005


A broken heart, not ready to mend
cause the love it felt was so strong
and the Angel of love that God sent
didn't stay in on earth that long

The broken heart is now crying
red blooded tears of hurting pain
it's soul and light is slowly dying
and it's love won't ever regain

A heart so broken and incomplete
something that many don't see
this heart is so fragile and weak
and it is hurting inside of ME....

*I know it's not one of my best*

Copyright 2005 - Sabrina Stelmach

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  • 18 years ago

    by Patrik

    As good and well written as the other poems I've read by you, you're a good poet:)

    Best wishes,
    Patrik

  • 18 years ago

    by Clarissa

    i agree with every word of ur poem and i definitly can relate to it 100%...excellent

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    I thought this was really good...another 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    If this isn't your best, your best must be incredible because this was a great poem. Job well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Iyla

    awww, sweetie this is so sad. even though this was a short poem i really enjoyed it, it got strait to the point, beautiful darling.
    5/5 def. <33
    Always,
    -xoxo-
    Kit

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