Broken Heart pt. 1

by nikki   Jul 28, 2005


I told you how i felt,
You said the same about me.

I asked you out,
You said you didn't like me "like that."

I told you how I felt about you,
You lied to me.

I loved you,
You didn't care.

I told you i had to move,
You didn't care.

I wrote you notes,
You avoided me.

I told you I would always love you,
You killed my only dream.

I told you I loved you,
You broke my heart.

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  • 18 years ago

    by .

    Omg thats really sad.....5/5 good job
    Becky
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    I'v read so many like this it isnt even funny...if you'd make your poems longer they'd be so much more original...and interesting...4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    Alot of people do that it seems. It is very sad.

  • 18 years ago

    by Goth

    Started off really good ...
    "I told you how i felt,
    You said the same about me."
    and the second verse ...
    "I asked you out,
    You said you didn't like me "like that."
    just got all choppy .. again you dif. got your point across..still a 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by SweetSuicide

    WoW really good i love this alot..5/5

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