Hm, at first I did not think that this could possibly be about your dad, but you did indeed state that it was in your poem. The rhyme scheme was a nice little
It had a good flow, but it was lacking imagery, I expected to see something in my head, but it wasn't as descriptive as I hoped. But you made up for it in other sections, such as the format. Good choice of rhyming, it's not *too* forced.
I loved your poem I gave it a 5. I know how it is to lose tuch witha father. But I think its good that you can write and let a little of your pain out. If you can it would nice if you can check out my poems and tell me what you think.....I can't wait to read more of your poems.