Age of the sacred terror

This is different, but it works too. Good choice to put it on the site. Well done. xx

Excellent, excellent once again. The structure of this poem was different and so heart-filling. I worship Allah and just the mention of him filled my soul with pride and gave a powerful effect to the whole poem. This bit of poetry can be portrayed in many ways. Keep up your spectacular writes! 5/5

Wow, you and your boyfriend have alot of talent. I give alot of credit to him.. I can't write like that.. only sad things and in the same structure.

tell him its writen beautifully.

excellent poem... keep it up

Very nicely written. 5/5 nothing less. Hope both of you keep writing and take care (always))xx:

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