Another fine day. (Huitain)

by Steven Beesley   Aug 16, 2005


Beauty as far as you can see
As I look, it feels like a dream
Wind in my hair, I feel so free
Nature surrounds me, reigns supreme
In the distance I see a stream
Twilight now begins to descend
Dew on the leaves begins to gleam
A fine day is about to end

Huitain:
A Spanish poetry form, it revolves around the number 8 - there are 8 lines to the poem, with 8 syllables per line. The rhyming scheme is ABABBCBC.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    Another fine piece.I am amazed at how effortlessly the flow of you work is within fixed/traditional forms(mine always seem somewhat forced).This is simply a beautiful piece celebrating a wonderful day, I can really feel the images and sense of the day..Great poem, truly.

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    Peaceful, beautiful...I agree with all.

  • 18 years ago

    by Iyla

    I agree with bob ^.^ very well written, and one of the best i've read! always keep writting m'dear!

  • 18 years ago

    by Already Beautiful

    this form of poetry really intreged me. i have never read a poem like this before and for my first read, i couldnt of picked a better one..

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    beautiful peice it makes me feel so peaceful just by reading your words. probably one of the best poems about nature i have read in a long time. again you did a beautiful job!

    ~Jacklyn

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