I'm still weak...

by facedownindirt   Sep 2, 2005




after two months
I'm still crying
after my shattered pieces
I'm still trying

I'm not giving up
I'm not giving in
I'm not letting your hateful memories
take my heart and win

I will stand my ground
and stare at your eyes
tell you I love you
and confess all my lies

I'll look in the mirror
and put on a smile
just so I "think"
this was all worth the while

I won't change at all
not the least bit
just so you "believe"
I'm through with this shit

you think I'm so tough
you think I'm so strong
I want to tell you now
that your totally wrong

because in the end
I'm still week
I just don't want you to see
my eyes that still leak

*please vote and comment... this is one of my favorite poems that I have written so it would be wonderful if you could tell me what you thought about it!*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Falling Up

    Wow. this is a pretty good poem. ive gone through this situation MANY TIMEs. as u can probably tell by my poetry, its mostly about boys and mostly heartbreak.. not all though. but still, for your age, you will have many more to come, and thus, much more inspiration to write about it. i really liked this poem, because it brought back what i thought were forgotten feelings. it reminded me that nomatter how much i try to forget a situation of the past, it still lingers, just hidden. keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Macy

    Great! i love this. one of my favorites. shit...i wish i could write like you,

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    I love this one...good job morgan you are seriously so talented : )

  • 18 years ago

    by --*arlene*--

    Wow!!Im 13 well im going to turn 14 but you have so much talent ...I love writing too but like they never come out the way i want it to...:( lol n*e ways good job and keep it up....

    Isnt suppose to be weak???;)

    Bye

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa Westfall

    That was a great poem. wow your only 12 and you write that good. im 26 and cant seem to write anymore. but you r great so keep it up....huggs...missy

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