My Loss

by chris   Sep 6, 2005


Tired and alone,
Longing,
For that helping hand,
To pull me through
Giving up,
Given up.
Nothing is left.
Pride and will,
Gone.
Strength to continue,
The fight.
Has vanished.
Reason and clear thinking,
No longer,
Know what those are.
Life is wins,
And losses.
I guess,
Mine is a loss.

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  • 17 years ago

    by smile

    A unique style of writting
    A great topic for a poem
    and an honest response on your behalf
    amazing poem

    **smile**

  • 18 years ago

    by gabs

    Wow thats truly amazing you have alot of talent .. keep it up .. and if you dont mind im going to send you a friend request on myspace ...
    take it easy

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    This poem was so sad and it made me cry...I just thought it was really touching and very emotional! Great job tho. 5/5 and yo ucan e-mail if you ever wanna talk! Take care my friend!

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