Love and obsession

by Lonely Heart .ღ.   Sep 19, 2005


Love and obsession
my heart is no longer in my possession

I\'ve been blessed with love
I\'ve been sent an angel from above

its you I adore
this feeling I just can\'t ignore
its like nothing I\'ve ever felt before

I never thought I\'d care so much
I think I\'d melt at your sweet touch

please don\'t play with my emotions
you forever have my deepest devotion

I don\'t know how you make me feel this way
but i know forever by your side I\'ll stay

even when things seem bleak
I can trust our love will not grow weak

I want to be with you until the end
somehow my heart you managed to mend

When I\'m around you, you caused my heart to pound
forever our heart and souls are locked and bound

I want to thank you for all you\'ve done
without your love, up to my head would be a gun

I don\'t know how to put how I really feel
do you know everyday my heart you steal?

I don\'t know how to word it all
for you how can i not fall

the only thing I have left to tell you
is I love you,

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    It is such a sweet and romantic poem. I loved it. -sighs-

  • 18 years ago

    by Jimmy

    This is a great peom. loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by Goth

    O.K.... now there you go the rhyming in this one went well, although a few were "forced" thats o.k.
    this line stood out at me ..."forever our heart and souls are locked and bound" ....now that was beautifly said!that deserves at least a 4

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashlee Nicole

    5/5 Good, except I didn't like the ending all too much...Don't take it personal or nothing...Just being honest...lol...I think with your creativity you could have ended itbetter...Keep it Up..
    Ash

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Not a bad poem, though I'm not much into love poems...I do love the way you rhymed though, good job.

    Forever I Remain,
    DarkSuicide

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