Voices

by Lonely Heart .ღ.   Oct 29, 2005


Restless thinking
In the shadows slowly sinking..

I hear you calling,
voices are back again,

I hear you whisper,
taking control of me
ill never be free

watching the shadows
consume me all alone again..

surronded by uncaring faces,
left with nothing except emply places

Isolated in my own world,
will it ever be free?

Haunted figures around me,
Consoling me from being free

There always there to protect me,
this is one thing you can't take away

I hear you calling,
voices are here again

I hear you whisper in my own mind, will it ever change?

Things can never change.
Every-things all the same..

I hear you calling

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I know this is poorly written,
But I would really like to know
what you all think of it, thank you ^_^

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  • 18 years ago

    by Leona

    I think this poem is great 5/5
    and keep up the good work
    Leona

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    This is actually good, I like what I got from it and the flow is ok! the last 3 lines are my fav! but capitalize the I in I'll please

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily

    It's a decently short poem, but you get a lot out of it for its short length!! It's a depressing poem, that makes total sense, and the words used describe it perfectly. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xX-jess-Xx

    Aww i loved it, it ws greatly written! dont say it ws poor! neways good work 5/5 jesxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Super job. I really like the poem. It was really well done. Keep up the great work. 5/5

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