The Descent

by Lonely Heart .ღ.   Mar 11, 2006


Every moment with you I saved in my heart
A story of love only you and me have known
I never thought anything would break us apart
Together we've faced the unknown

Do you remember each moment of joy?
Now theres just pain like I never knew before
we've played with emotions like a toy
yet we've always came crawling back for more

Each chapter we've made together was created from love
What once was told as a perfect romance turn into to a heart breaking tragedy
so much for you being an angel from above

clothing is soaked from flowing tears
slowly dying inside and out
nothing is ever how it appears
this life I could do without

Each second away from you the pain gets worse
I cant forget everything we've shared
can nothing put this pain in reverse?
I cant forget how much I've cared

nothing compares to the pain of loosing you
now that you're gone theres only emptiness in my heart
don't you care about all we've been through?
the pain shot through me like a poisoned dart

you have become part of me
all thats left are tear stained hope
please just take notice of my plea
theres no way left to cope

My will to keep living is loosing to death
you've spoiled me with happiness for too long
I want so badly for this to be my last breath
I cant see letting death win as wrong.

Lost in a world of sorrow without you, no chance of escape
please take my hand and lead the way
love is pains most common shape
hold me close and tell me it will be okay

You start out in heaven you end up in hell
Its a life lesson we all will know well.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy B

    Know what ya going through there. my gf left me 2 months ago, and I also felt like it was the end of the world. but after some time, I got over it. just hang on, and allow your mind to relax, and think clearly again. Life keeps on going no mather what, so don't go giving up so easy.
    Very good poem by the way 5/5
    Tim

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    I always admire those who can rhyme without ruining the poem! well done!

    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Synh

    Good poem

    'Each chapter we've made together was created from love
    What once was told as a perfect romance turn into to a heart breaking tragedy
    heartache like this I've never known of'

    Kinda thought that verse was odd but other than that, good poem. 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Wow, thats an amazing poem. Your flow was well done as well as the consistant use of vocabulary. I luved it. I really liked the lines:

    "nothing compares to the pain of loosing you
    now that you're gone theres only emptiness in my heart
    don't you care about all we've been through?
    the pain shot through me like a poisoned dart"

    Well said and deep. Keep up the awesome work 5/5
    ~Luvz~
    ~Angie~
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    This poem was excptionally strong, and FILLED with great emotions! I really loved your wording, and how strong the feelings were. great poem!! 5/5

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