The 4th month of my life

by ShhhhItsASecret©   Sep 21, 2005


You took me and threw me into that wall!
You didn’t care that I was young and small!
I was just a baby, why’d you pick me?
What did you think? That I would just say “Wee!”?

Well, it wasn’t fun and it hurt me so!
What you did was downright lower than low!
For trying to take my life, I HATE you!
I HATE you so much, you haven’t a clue!

You had no right to do something like that!
I don’t care if I was being a bratt!
I was 4 months old! What could I have done?
I was a living being, a someone!

You took the life from me I could’ve had!
For that, oh my gosh, I HATE you so bad!
Because of you, it’s hard for me to trust!
When I think of you, I’m filled with disgust!

Too bad you have no regrets of that day!
I HATE you so bad and feel you must pay!
I want to see you rot in a jail cell!
Because you made me go through so much hell!

Don’t you care about what you did to me?
I wish you had a heart so you could see!
I don’t know what you were thinking that day!
And frankly, I don’t care, cuz you must pay!

You have to pay for what you did to me!
I can no longer know that you are free!

©2005 Brandy Dorr

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  • 18 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Awwww, this is so sad, but beautifully written, the words used express sooo much emotion.
    5/5

    Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

    xxx cici xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Once again great work!! im sorry to hear that though.. it was well written. uv got a good grasp on that style, and i love your work.

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    How sad that so mean Im sorry that happened to you....It was an awsome poem though great emotion....Much Love....Joclyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Awww im so sry:( gr8 poem tho! keep up the gr8 work! this poem didnt have any flaws whatsoever except i thought that the rhyme of me and wee was a bit forced. 5/5 tho!!!
    ~ME~

  • 18 years ago

    by .

    You took me and threw me into that wall!
    You didn’t care that I was young and small!
    I was just a baby, why’d you pick me?
    What did you think? That I would just say “Wee!”?

    WEE lol omg i found that funny in a sad way lol sorry...but it was really good 5/5
    Becky
    xoxo

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