Blue Ink

by Atomic   Oct 5, 2005


The blue ink that flow so freely,
Paints a picture of insanity's sane.
It writes poetry so beautifully,
It erases the scars we gradually gained.

Our hearts slowly mend each time,
We turn our soul into a poetic transformation.
Every time we write down a poetic rhyme.
And each time we read it over for the pure sensation.

The sorrow and the passion each word held,
Marks the dying and the revivification of the heart.
It's our poems that we turn to each time we fail,
The obstacles life throws at us from the start.

With this ink pen that write so blue and clear,
A poem ponderously unraveled from its nest.
A poem written by a broken heart and salty tears,
A poem stirred by a poetic soul unrest.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!©

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  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Wow this expressed so much and was an excellent read keep it up atomic !!

  • 18 years ago

    by gasping for air

    Dang ur good!!! i hope you keep writing.. ur definitely good at what your doing! if you could check out my poem called our youth... i think you might like it... its pretty good even if i do say so myself...
    amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Wonderful. it expresses what so many of us feel wehn we start writing.... the poem has a good solid structure, and none of the rhymes seem at all forced. *applaudes*

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Hey you,
    awesome stuff you have here. I couldn't read the first 3 poems, because the were (love poems) and at work, it blocks it off cuz it thinks its a 'dating' thing. don't worry, when I get home, I will read more :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Carmen

    That is so true. i love reading poems about...wel... poetry! lol. 5/5

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