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by Bluey! Oct 10, 2005
Sadness, depression /
Feeling sad when watching you,
Tears are falling, missing you.
Holding your hand, touching you
Thinking silently, I love you.
Hoping it is all a dream,
Wanting to wake up,
I close my eyes, and open up.
Peering at you, im crying again.
Why'd you have to die?
I mourn and scream,
Lost deep in sorrow.
Regretting so much,
Not keeping in touch,
Not reminding you how much you mean.
Now its too late, this is the end.
See you in heaven, my precious friend.
Oops..dammit...it looks like i got into your poem so much that i didn't even notice that i've read, rated, && commented on it before...=(...well..heh, i rated it again cause i forgot...and just now i found my comment. Sorry. lol, and it's still 5/5
Wow...thats good...its beautiful and touching:):)...thankyou soo much for ur comments..they made me feel special:P:P..and yeah im 14:P:P...Anyways, beautiful poem!!!
Aww... that was really sad, but beautiful... i don't know what you mean, you're really not that bad of a writer! thanks for the comments... i'll check out some more of urs!
Aww.. that just made me cry.. i love it.. its so beautiful in its dedication and sorrowful words.. i adored the first stanza.. it reli stood out
and also the last line.. that just brings me to tears..
beautiful beautiful work..
im so sorry for ur loss
keep up the good work
p.s. thnx a lot for ur comments
by Tara Kay
I really loved that poem, it was sad but really brilliant. keep it up
I think the first stanza really caught the whole poem for me, i like it when that happens.