I can't

by BeeJay   Oct 28, 2005


I can't wake up in the morning
Without being disappointed I'm still alive

I can't look at a bottle of pills
Without wanting to consume the entire bottle

I can't go near water
Without wishing I would drown

I can't go near fire
Without hoping I would burn

I can't see a rope
Without hoping it would strangle the life out of me

I can't look at a knife
Without wanting to cut

I can't get in a car
Withour hoping to die in a crash

I can't cross the traintracks
Without wishing a train would crush me

I can't go to sleep
Without wishing it was the last day of my life

Do you still want to think I'm fine?

© 2005 Brandy Dorr

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  • 20 years ago

    by Kayla

    Wow...this one is amazing, I feel your pain, I understand your fear...Keep writting... your amzing... thanks for the comments on Love Always...

    Kayla
    XOXO

  • 20 years ago

    by Lindsay C

    Wow..very sad! very good poem tho!

  • 20 years ago

    by master of shadow

    I remember when i felt like that too....

    its a great poem and captures it prefectly

  • 20 years ago

    by im ur AdDiCtiOn

    That poem is really good... i know how you feel too.. thank you for my comment and i hope neil doenst do anything to many poepl love him and with your poem if you ever need someone to talk to you no where to talk to me
    ~a.f.u~

  • 20 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Wow !!!
    I loved this... it's incredibly powerful, the words mean so much and this is full of emotion.
    I especially liked the way you've finished it. It had a completely different effect than the rest of the poem.... it really stood out (if you dont know what i mean, i do, im sorry !!)

    Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

    xxx cici xxx

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