A kid's life

by ---AL---   Nov 1, 2005


I didn't know where to put this poem so i put it here let me know where it should be placed (what catagory)

A kid's life

Ever since I've passed eighteen,
My life has turned so well obscene,
All twisted up and bent to hell,
Wasting nickels on wishing wells,

No more nickels, lets throw a dime,
And Wish upon a former time,
Where I was 3 or maybe four,
Wanting cookies and nothing more

So Make me a kid, and let me loose
Let's play a game of duck, duck, goose,
And Chant real loud the ABC
Oh! how I wish I was but three,

A little kid with so little stress,
A nap each day, would be the best,
With mommy making every meal,
Wow, being three is such a deal,

Hide and seek and peek a boo,
Hop-scotch, tag and cooties too,
No more pain of love or stress,
A toddler life would be the best,

So flick that wand and make me four,
And I'll never ask for something more,
Because being four would be the best,
What foolish person could contest?

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  • 18 years ago

    by ღtheღcrunkღpirateღ

    Interesting poem... lol its v true i would have to agree with you too
    ~courtie

  • 18 years ago

    by Yep thats him

    I think that poem should go in the life society section because thats what life is

  • 18 years ago

    by MisterScabbedWings

    Someone who finally read my mind. lol. but honestly, back in the days of pure innocence the world was still alright.

    -PG-

  • 18 years ago

    by ---AL---

    Haha of course i am alright, but I don't believe a writer should confine himself to one style...explore a little you'll surprise yourself.

  • 18 years ago

    by *rach*and*bee*

    Hey hun,
    awww.....i like this...i wish i could undo some things lately...gosh doesn't everyone....
    i also like that its not ur normal kind of style or voice or something...idk...u just sound different....very nostalgic...like something very bad has happened and u r looking towards the past for help when u should be looking to the future.....u ok?
    or maybe im just reading into it too much...hey, i loved ur work as always
    keep it up, i love reading them
    xoxo~*rachel*

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