Life burns

by Natasha   Nov 20, 2005


If one man died like a butterfly, and life burned from the touch of a reeper,
then one love would be a crooked lie,
and the world would lie in the hands of evil.

if we had no sympathy for the lost souls,
we would have chosen the path of disgrace,
then we would give this life to our children,
And we would teach them to hate this place.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Paula

    It's true if we carry on like this we will force children to hate the only place they have ever known

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Vooo!! speechless... all i can say is that i gave 5/5...i dont hv words to appreciate...amazing dear..all the best

  • 18 years ago

    by justeene

    Thats heaps nice well thought
    alota feeling

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very deep poem. i like it a lot

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron 1 remo

    Hmm this one was very deep i liked it keep up the good work xaaronx

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