I see

by UnToLd TrUtH   Dec 22, 2005


I see the tears you shed
I see the life's you took
I see the anger you held back
I see your malicious eyes on me
I see you are coming for me
I see my death flash before me
I see you standing over me
I see you smiling as you wipe your knife off.
I see you cry for what you have done as I lie there and die.

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Nice job i must say....Lovin that Repitition....Good Good Good 5/5
    ttyl sometime
    PeAcE
    ~The Poet~

  • 18 years ago

    by rebecca

    I love it .its nice keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Very good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by BeeBeeGun

    It shows alot of feeling in such a short poem
    well done thats how i like poems so good job
    keep up the great writing
    check out mine sometime

    **binkz**

  • 18 years ago

    by hanna

    It shows lots of feeling! its really good!
    and i love the word malicious!

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