Broken Man Part II

by The Poetic Child   Jan 3, 2006


You talk to me like its fine
knowing your cheating
you seem like you have no sympathy,
its my heart that your beating

I'm Hurt physically and Mentally
My mind is Dead
I'm crying inside and out
The pain you fed

The Tempting Feeling
Just to take that knife
Take it Out and end it
Just end my life

you took my heart and ripped it
just played with it like a toy
Smashed and Crashed it
like I'm just your little boy

killed me inside,
made my heart bleed
To think that you really loved me
Together we would succeed

i feel like I'm worthless
i feel so Weak
Hurting all over
in my voice i cant speak

i tremble in tears
i lay down alone,
with no on here
to call my own

I'm hoping i can make it
i really hope i can
but the fact still remains
I'm the "Broken Man"

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  • 18 years ago

    by FoundHim

    I really liked it a lot and have nothing to really say =] great poem!
    ~Sandra~

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Wow intense..nice ontinuation...way to hold your readers attention.

    LISSA

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Alright well, unfortunately my computer doesn't let me leave comments for the love poems, but I have infact read 'unrhymed love' and it was another really well done piece. I really like your stuff, and so far have no complaint at all. The comments above, for this poem, well to them it might not have had a very good flow, but while I was reading it, I noticed no rhyme or rhythm matters to work on. It all seemed very good to me. Excellent jobs on them all. :)