Listen To The Words

by Lu   Feb 22, 2006


Do you know what I think is crazy ?
I think many of you will agree
the beauty within a poem
that some don't take the time to see

With the click of a button
down vote it with a one
is it pure jealousy ?
or a child having fun ....

Most of the greatest poets
are a pond of sitting ducks
shot down with silly comments
like dat poem sucks ........

There are poets from many countries
with their talent they'll amaze
so full of gifted knowledge
that deserves the highest praise

A truthful heartfelt comment
are the ones I admire
the ignorant ones , like garbage
just toss then in the fire

Stop and listen to the words
coming straight from the heart
painted beautiful words of poetry
creative , true works of art

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  • 15 years ago

    by Marcus blake

    That was hot well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Wow! I really love this poem to pieces! Its so truthful! I hate it when poeple downvote just because.... Everyone has their own talent in writing and it should be appreaciated. Yup yup! It happened to one of my poems, i had bout 47 votes with all fives and then all of a sudden someone downvoted moi lol! I actually laughed, twas amsuing. meh!

    Anywas, this was one poem that needed to be said and you said it wonderfully! This poem is one message that everyone needs to know.

    The flow and rhytm is very well done. And the use of slang was just perfect. Made me smile. =D Very creative! Keep up the amazing work! 5/5

    ~Luvz~
    ~Angie~
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Lashell Harrison

    I really love this!!! This is exactly how I feel sometimes

  • 18 years ago

    by neens

    Wonderful poem with a wonderful message. I love it
    ~neens~

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Sunny said it..the flow was awesome in this peice Luanne! I wrote poems about this too but to bad them people won't take the time to read it! I hate it too cyber mommy! It is so unfair really how some creative and new styles of writing get shot down! Beautiful write LuLu (I saw in that e-mail that was one of your nicknames lol) I love yas!
    Chels

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