Surrounded By Snow

by Krathia   Feb 23, 2006


A girl cries, surrounded by snow
Her tears are covered with pain and sorrow
Left out in the cold, alone to die,
Her only companions are echoing lies

A girl bleeds, surrounded by snow
Her scars become deeper as blood drops grow
Banished by all, no longer can cry,
Her only friend is the unforgiving sky

A girl sits, surrounded by snow
Her heart shatters while blood and tears flow
Trembling and waiting for tears to dry,
Her only way out is to no longer try

A girl falls, surrounded by snow
The clouds cry for the dying girl below
SHe drops to the ground as snowflakes fly
Her corpse collapses as she closes her eyes.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Johanna

    That was really amazing, you're words are beautiful. You have a lot of potential.. I'm looking forward to reading more! =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Tormented

    Hey!
    its well gd. i love it =)

  • 18 years ago

    by -Ghostship Fidelity-

    Mm... Brings back some memories. I liked the rawness of it. I liked the idea. I like the boldness. It's deep but out in the open...

    Good job.

    ^_^

    -Tony