The Ocean Welcomes Me

by VioletRaven   Feb 24, 2006


I have dressed in white and Now I leave to search for what cannot be found,
Outwardly pure, I need the oceans welcoming embrace to cleans me of my sins.
When they find me I will be beautiful and at peace
No one shall again look down on me, with hatred in their eyes, only love and soft sympathy.
Do not be sad, for I shall wait for you on the other side.
My patience in death is unending, as it was not in life.
Do no rush to meet me, for I will always be here.
In every word and thought and smile, I am yours.
Keep a White Angel by your side, and I shall watch over you.
I leave you this last gift...Hope
Goodbye my Love.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Megadrive

    Yeah Violet! Very well done!!! I love it! It is so dark and beautiful, I love ur choice of words, and the flow, its just deep feeling, and kinda sucked me in, I just felt inspired, and in a sense of darkness! It was just so well writtin! And flowed so well! Great job!=D total 5!!!

    ~++~

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow this is really good!

    Mallori

  • 18 years ago

    by President Dead

    This is a really powerful bit or writing, it was written perfectly to set the imagery and mood of the poem, great write

  • 18 years ago

    by Naerwen

    Sad Maiden asks you to stay. Thee ocean, oh beauty she, can be admired from afar. Again let us dance in the snow on ocean shore. Not goodbye to Naerwen, but a welcoming to our new dance, Our dance with ocean waves. May we both dress in white and finally belong. Beautiful.

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Wow... this poem is so pretty and perfect. Absolutely flawless. You've really got a way with words...keep up the awesome writing, kay?!

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