She Is Alone

by BleedingAngel   Mar 16, 2006


Standing on the corner
Watching cars drive by
She is standing there alone
No one notice that she cries

Suddenly a car is stopping
He roles down the window
Asks her"How much hunni"?
And they disappear like a shadow

She is a Queen of the night
Girl of the cities dirty streets
Only knowing that she's alive
By feeling her hearts beat

She lets him touch her body
But he can't get to her soul
And though it's been broken
her heart still seems to be whole

After he is finished with her
He dumps her somewhere
Doesn't want any one to see him
"He has never been there"!

Another car drives by her
She can hardly stand anymore
Her life is just so messed up
Thinking of her life before

Before she started doing drugs
Back when she was daddy's girl
She had everything back then
She lived in a perfect world

And now she just wants to die
Knowing that what she do is wrong
A car stops, pulling herself together
She tries to smile and to seem strong

*I didn't know how to end this, so sorry for the crappy ending. This poem was really hard for me to write...I was in Copenhagen this evening and I know that young girls prostitute them self, but I have never been in the middle of it all, like I was this evening. It broke my heart to see those young girls at 14-16 years old, going in to cars and leave with old men, made me cry!!! I wanted to safe them all, I wanted to scream at them and do something, but hey what can I do??? Nothing!!! Well I just had to get it out, sorry!!!

Copyright 2006 - Sabrina Stelmach

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  • 17 years ago

    by Unknown-Medic

    Damn, thats really good

  • 17 years ago

    by pseudo

    Wow. You have so much passion. And its true sometimes you wonder what the heck is going on in this world when things like that happen.. its really crazy. I love how in this poem you tell a story in it too because this reality for some girls is becomming too real. Very emotional and powerful message. Amazing job

    --emotionless.19*

  • 17 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    "She lets him touch her body
    But he can't get to her soul
    And though it's been broken
    her heart still seems to be whole"

    This is so sad is frustrating but this fantastic gift of writing has not only clearly generated a great deal of interest but awareness and you have certainly touched with your words and I am sure many others...sensational...

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 17 years ago

    by Sole

    I thoguht the ending was great - Her trying to stand strong, and having to hide behind a facade of smiles and strength.

    He dumps her some where

    Somewhere is one word - no need for the space.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 17 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Wow, they r about my age, I might commit suicide if I was them, so sorry 4 them...life is always unfair...y do these hev 2 happen...:(