Please Answer Me

by BleedingAngel   Mar 27, 2006


Dear God, listen to my prayer tonight
I will only tell my secret to you
I think I am giving up this fight
Or will you try to help me through

I hurt so badly inside my heart
It's been broken once again
I never thought that we would be apart
Thought that he was mine until the end

How can I live with those lies
Never thought he would be untrue
He never looked me in the eyes
When he swore to me by You

So now I hole my precious blade
Waiting for you to give me a sign
My life with him was a mistake
So should I take this life of mine

Should I really cut both of my wrists
And bleed myself to death
Isn't there more to life than this
Is it today I'll take my last breath

God I really hope you hear me
I really need your advice
Is this what I'll always be
Living with his hurtful lies

Should I say my final goodbye
To all of those whom I love
And tell that when I die
I'll be watching from above

Please Answer me!

Copyright 2006 - Sabrina Stelmach

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  • 17 years ago

    by pseudo

    Amazing job.. This is so sad though... I hope you're okay =) I loved the rhyming scheme, it flowed perfectly and I mean literally perfectly lol.. Very well thought out and emotional... I have always thought poems written out of experience stood out and I can say the same for yours. Awesome job!

    --emotionless.19*

  • 17 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Good rhyming in this peice, very smooth and unforced. the structure in general is god and the flow smooth. the content does not have the same power as some of your other peices, but still holds a lot of emotion and thought.

    5/5

    btw in the 4th stanza i think the word "hole" shouls maybe be "hold"

  • 17 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    This started out really well as a prayer but it turned "suicidal" in the middle and lost its impact...just didn't do it for me...but still it looks as if much time and consideration was put into it.

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by xX-jess-Xx

    Aww such a ...pretty poem, i no that seems a wierd word to use, but it was beutiful, i love your poetry! i kind of hav a poem like it! 5/5 jesxx

  • 18 years ago

    by physco

    Awww wow 5/5

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