Nothing at all

Aww this made me sad...I'm glad this is an old poem or I'd be worried. I love how you express your pain here, I can really relate to not having anything anymore, but I like how you tell your story. This poem touched my heart. Very nice my friend. Nik

"All day i sit and i dream
of a world where i doesn't exist"
-I really like this stanza, but I am confused about one thing in the second line. Should it
read "where I DON'T exist," or are you
referring to not wanting the word "I" itself to exist. If so, I think it is very strong that way, but I would put the word `I` in quotations, that
way it is not grammatically confusing.

"sit awake and think along my pillow
let me mind yell out a bellow"
-`me` should be `my`

Overall I think this is a good piece. Honestly it almost brought me to tears. I can tell these words are really coming from your heart, and I hope that you find yourself in a better place now. We all get down, but please don't underestimate the important part you play in other peoples lives. We only truly have nothing, when we disregard ourselves.

A beautiful heart wrenching piece,
Keep writing down the bones,

`Nova

Aww i l0ve this p0em, its sh0rt and p0werful. i particularly like the last lines, they t0p it 0ff ;]
best wishes ;x
l0ve maddy x0ox

Thank you very much everyone for your continuing support. I really appreciate all of your comments and very much appreciate your feedback and your help through all the difficult times in my life...you have been the voice that have kept my going.

Thanks,
Shaun M.