by Cella Bella Apr 8, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
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Look at all these losers |
by Debbie
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Amazing to see the subject, while being annoyed at those 'losers', actually is concerned for them. How he seemed to perceive his surroundings actually reflects and reveals his real character -- a loser. In just a few words, you managed to encompass so much truth and lucidity. I adored it. Lovely work, as always! 5/5 ~Marian |
by Dawn Manna
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Another wonderful poem...ur a great writer....keep up the amazing work 5/5 |
by Tom
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Very good and very true |
by Sandra D
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Again, this is so true! it flowed well, and i like how the rhymes weren'y forced. great job, ur an amazing writer!! |
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I enjoyed this poem because it captured human-nature... keep it up 5/5 |