Attack

by ReBecca   Apr 26, 2006


Attack

The walls are shrinking.
Closing me within.
There's no beginning.
And no end.

I can't breathe!
I feel frantic!
It's all spinning.
I commence to panic!

Black spots appear
Before my eyes
Can anyone hear
My voiceless cries?

My heart is pounding
Oh so fast!
Sweat breaks out
Don't think I'm gonna last!

My pulse is erratic.
Not enough air.
Nausea rises
Fits of despair!

Am I dying?
Or goin' crazy!
Fearful thoughts
Seem so hazy.

Shaking, shuddering
Body's so sore.
Slowly it eases,
I can breathe once more.

Until next time
When it comes again
Panic!
The nightmare that doesn't end.

ReBecca Sanchez

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  • 17 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    Thanx for commenting on my poem, i've got quite a few submitted if you want to check them out xx i love this- your meaning is put across so well- vivid, chilling, haunting. thanx for your knid words as well, my poems are unfortunately based on truth but i use them as a way of expressing anger, and i'm really ok, but thanks anyway. nat xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    Wow I am mystified that was such a great write!
    The imagry you created with your words are so vivid. You described in detail the process the body goes through during nightmares while keeping the flow flawless!!
    Loved this poem lots! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow i really like this poem....5/5

    Mallori

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Oooh, this is so gripping...I love it!
    The quick flow adds an element of intensity, which I think brought the poem to life.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

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