X You

by Sole   May 2, 2006


It's hard to see your motives
Suffocation, under siege
It's hard to tell your time
To see what you believe

It's hard to see within you
Things I cannot understand
The way your mind is working
Is beyond a different land

It's hard to know your feelings
As you leave the room alone
I don't know how to comfort
My confidence is thrown

I thought I knew you well
But what is there to hide?
I'm not sure how to ask
So I'll keep it locked inside

Your caring conscience shows
I know I can relate
Your kindness, always glows
Someone I could never hate

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nelle

    This is very sweet but a little confusing. Some parts were clear and others not so much! the thought behind it was great but, other then that it was good!!

    Chanelle---

  • 17 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Cute friendship poem. Good job writing this. It is a little confusing to me though because it talks how this person keeps everything to herself but then she is always open...I don't know I am confusing myself.
    You did a good job though. keep it up.

    >black&&blue

  • 17 years ago

    by Shawna

    Wow!! I LOVE this poem!! I can totally relate to it!!
    It's hard to know your feelings, as you leave the room alone, I dont' know how to comfort, my confidence is thrown-

    Great Great work!! My husband needs to read this!!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Aw I loved this poem! It flowed so well, i could even listen to my music while reading to it, and usually i have to turn it off :P. Great work on this poem, i especially liked this lines

    "It's hard to see your motives
    Suffocation, under siege
    It's hard to tell your time
    To see what you believe"

    -Steph

  • 17 years ago

    by J Lau

    Another emotional piece that was written from the bottom of your heart. Keep up the great work! 5/5

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