Forbidden...

by Lying To Live   May 19, 2006


Pain
Wrapped up
Inside like a present
On Christmas day
Longing
To be opened
But forbidden
Boundaries will not be crossed
Bad weather
Wets a cheek
Wiped away hastily
Secrets kept
Land features of red roses
Flow down the palm
Of the utensil
Used by a south paw
Controlled and restricted
Right foot forward
Is a must
No hesitations
Smile replaced
And the battle has
Proceeded

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  • 17 years ago

    by Joy

    Awesum work you rock

  • 17 years ago

    by XxxXLoveless_WristsXxxX

    Now I wish I had written this...it sums up feelings and emotions so well..keep it up gurl!

    Luv ya heaps x x x

  • 17 years ago

    by smile

    Wow this is really good, i read over it a few times, its magnificant, well done
    5/5

    xXxXcomment/rate meXxXx

    --smile--

  • 17 years ago

    by Meggie33

    Im not really into the sadder types of poems.. but hey i think you may have just changed that.. that poem had really good meaning and the way it was put together really kept me reading... please comment on one of mine... preferably one of my newest ones...
    thanks a lot!

    **meggie**

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww.. that very good! it really draws you in with all the short lines! i really liked it! :) excellent work! 5/5

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