by UnToLd TrUtH Jun 7, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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Hate is the word I use for you. |
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This was really sad and angry :( |
by Jstuckie
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HEY WUS UP DATS A GUD P0EM i CAN KiND 0F RELATE :) |
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I love your poems. |
by Sarah Ann
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This poem brought tears to my eyes, and it was almost enough to make me weep. The anger and truth in this poem is so strong and I am sure it calls out to every heart; even the hardest of them all. I can relate to this poem wholeheartedly, for I myself and others I know were in similar horrific situations. Hopefully, God will give them their days. Keep up your good work! 5/5 |
by awww
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That was great... i was even surprised that you were able to express such anger and hatred without swearing or cursing... i really felt the emotion... excellent way to let out your feelings... keep writing and expressing! |