by Bridgette Jun 7, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Pain bleeds from my soul |
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Very easy to read, like smooth chocolate no bumps or lumps... great poem! |
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I love the begining of this poem |
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I really like your poem, it's beautifully sad. It has a good flow and the rhyming's good. |