Left the City

Ah sad
but another good poem
keep up the good writing

Very well written, but such a sad poem. I like how you portray the city, the street names... This poem is so sad.
I gave it a 5. You're very talented, Keep up the good work.

Thats soo nice! loved the way you used the streets and all! yet it was very sad!

keep it up!

thanks for the comment on my poems

Again detail..but a good poem

Lissa

I like how you named the streets and the entire metaphor. its fantastic