Confused By Your Actions

by Kirsty palmer   Jul 4, 2006


Did last night happen I sat and asked myself,
I dwelled in the past, risking my health,
Why did I fall into your clasping trap?
Was it your firm hand that formed that slap?
Gazing into the mirror, shocked, shaken with fear,
As my trembling hand removes from my heart a spear,
A dream would not be true, I call it a nightmare,
Your face so real I can feel your evil glare!
There was no one around to help with the pain,
The evil spirit in you proved my loss was your gain!

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  • 17 years ago

    by EM0CHiLD 0F THE DEAD

    I LiKE THiS 1 THE BEST THATNX F0R Y0UR C0MMENT

  • 17 years ago

    by jinxerella

    I like the rhymeing, and how it all makes sooo much sence...ususally when ppl make poems like that, they jump around. but i can completely understand urs! keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Elana Cole

    That was relly good I can relate to that poem

  • 17 years ago

    by lauracampbell

    Oh wow i liked this poem. i like short poems especialy :D huray :p but also because its short you left alot out, like who did it too who exactly, its good to leave a sence of mystery to the audience, lets there emagination bring out the worst :p nicely done!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren

    Very powerful... Is this a real-life experience? 5/5. Very well written. Comments are appreciated.

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