Words

by Bridgette   Jul 8, 2006


I wish there were words to describe
Exactly how I feel towards you
The words are there, I know it
But refuse to make an escape route

I keep them locked away inside my heart
Out of fear? yes. But you wouldn't understand
They are all so perfectly misplaced
I'm losing it, right now, right where I stand

Remember the time you held me
And said 'Everything will be okay'
I need to hear those words right now
To help me make it through the day

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  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Very nice poem =). I liked the flow, and the way you descibed exactly how you felt. Keep up the writing...you're a fantastic writer. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    It was a little short but you got straight to the point. And I liked it alot. The first stanza stood out the most to me. Not being able to find the right words. And I thought you ended it great too. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 17 years ago

    by not a poet

    Great concept, i hate it when you feel something so overwhelming yet no words can help you talk about it! great write!

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    The first stanza, didn't rhyme. 'route' and 'you' don't have a similar sound, unless you pronounce it differently. I'm not quite sure, but how I say it, doesn't rhyme with 'you'. Other than that, this was a good poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by NannO

    I loved it.. it was short and straight to the point.. the first stanza didnt rhyme, tho, i dunno if u meant not to.. i cud feel the emotion of ur words.. touched me deep down.. :D:D
    it was kinda sad, tho.. but i loved it..
    keep it up
    thnx 4 ur comment
    take care
    NannO

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