Pain

by aknives sweet kiss   Jul 11, 2006


Im filled with anger as tears fill my eyes
i punch the mirror haning on my wall
blood drips from nuckles
i pick up a knife and cut my wrist
as the blood slowly runs from my cuts and falls to the floor
i sit in acorner and cry
i clean up the blood and walk away
like it never happened

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  • 17 years ago

    by struggling

    Sad but its great i love it.Remember I love you and im here you are wonderful and great dont ever 4get that.
    Love ya Strugglingxoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Wow. This one was really good I must say. The depth, as in the others, are wonderful. Nicely done!

    -Jennifer.

  • 17 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    That was.descriptive, the poem was interesting. It was one of the most descriptive short poems I have ever read, most of the shorter poems aren't well done. The ending was sort of weak, I think you could have used stronger words, but I like the sudden twist to it. Good write.

  • 17 years ago

    by Silver

    Hehe so graphic love that. Very good my lovely friend.
    -Love, Jen.

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