Pain

Amazing.
this was a great poem.
loved it from the beginnging to the end.
could really feel the emotion and sadness in it

I felt I'm drowning with my tears
I don't know
How could i stop my tears to pour

loved that part

5/5

OMG i love this poem i so can relate to it this stanza the most and in my opinion is the best

"Nobody knows how hard
I keep this pain inside
I'll always smile and laugh
Just to let them know I'm alright
And everything is OK"
this poem was soo emotional and flowed so well i luv it, im adding it to my favs
5/5

Good poem, except there's those grammatical errors that make it look bad. Work on it a bit. 4/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

Again the emotion is so powerful. I think the only thing you can do is to widen your vocabulary. Try to find some stronger words. I really liked this part:

I felt I'm drowning with my tears

Amazing Job

5/5

I can relate to it.
You described emotions greatly, and the atmosphere in the poem is excellently created.
Just two suggestions:
1. Capitalize I in some stanzas
2. Don't repeat the same word too often, like you did with "hard".
The rest of the poem is great, and the ending -the last line- is very effective like conclusion.
Keep up, 5/5