X Shadow

Has a very emotional message and it pertains to something that is taken seriously. The rhyming made it sound so much like a song and I could definitely imagine this in a song. Could job 5/5

Hey congrats at getting 3rd in my contest...so ill just do this 1 for now because i want u 2 pic ur other 3 i do..if u dun by 2morro ill just finish up. anyway wow this was great! it had such details and wonderful use of words...5/5

I was confused when I read the first line, then I kept reading on, and I guess I figured out what it meant. Does it have something to do with the size of the shadow? Hmm, well yeah it was a bit confusing, but still a good poem.

I dunno if i liked this poem, it seemed really wierd and i couldnt follow it, it started about an eating disorder and then went to self-harm and i dunno what was meant by this poem.
it flowed well though, and to you, it prob makes sense.
x Love Tara-Kay

I like this a lot. It seemed to start off like quite a few other cutting/eating disorder poems I've read, but the ending was so powerful! The last stanza really just made the whole poem in my opinion. Nice work!
- polly